澳洲我用chatgpt写了个投诉邮件给学校

在澳大利亚中学教育



我就中文写了事情简介，然后让chatgpt翻译，然后让它给我写封英文邮件给学校老师。我稍微改了改。这玩意太好用，太省事了！

I hope this email finds you well. I wanted to tell you about a concerning incident. That occurred last Thursday and required attention from the school.

During lunchtime, AA accidentally left her laptop in the classroom while she was putting away her books. Unfortunately, one of her classmates took advantage of the situation and stole her laptop. AA remembered seeing BB and her friends in the classroom before leaving. When she approached BB， during the mass singing rehearsal to ask about her laptop, BB claimed to have no knowledge of its whereabouts. However, after the rehearsal, AA discovered her laptop inside BB's locker. Despite this evidence, BB tried to deny her actions and suggested she was simply "minding it."

I believe it is crucial for the school to address this matter promptly. The incident raises concerns about the safety and security of personal belongings within our school community. It is essential that we maintain a safe and respectful environment for all students.

Thanks for your attention to this matter. Please keep me informed of any developments or actions taken regarding this incident.

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感觉不够简洁啊，如果我写信前面三句会这样
Hope you are well. Here I would like to discuss an incident, which happened last Thursday...

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我女儿也说好fancy，我觉得还行，显得比较重视 关键是省事啊。

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娃本来上个星期告诉学校这件事了，但是学校没有任何回复。我才决定写邮件催催学校的，所以觉得正式一点用词比较好

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学校用chatgpt给你回了一封邮件

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请问是公校吗？ 私校对这种偷窃行为应该是0 容忍的吧？搞不好就是开除啊

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双方互发 ChatGpt， 最后是两个ChatGpt 代理互搞

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我帮学校写好回信了，不用问，肯定chatgpt  你写的信的内容我到现在也没看过

Dear [Sender's Name],

Thank you for bringing this incident to our attention. I understand how concerning and disruptive such situations can be for our school community. I assure you that we take incidents like these very seriously, and we are committed to addressing them promptly and appropriately.

We have thoroughly investigated the incident you reported, taking into account the evidence provided by AA and the discovery of her laptop in BB's locker. Our findings indicate that BB was indeed involved in the theft of AA's laptop. This behavior is not in line with our school's values of respect, honesty, and responsibility.

We have taken immediate disciplinary actions against BB in accordance with our school's policies. We have also conducted discussions with BB, her parents, and relevant staff members to ensure she understands the gravity of her actions and the consequences they carry. Additionally, we will be implementing measures to reinforce the importance of personal property security and respect for others' belongings within our school community.

Please be assured that we are committed to maintaining a safe and secure environment for all our students. We understand the importance of fostering trust and ensuring the well-being of each individual within our school community. We will continue to monitor the situation closely and take appropriate steps to prevent similar incidents from occurring in the future.

Thank you for bringing this matter to our attention, and I appreciate your cooperation and support throughout this process. If you have any further concerns or if there are any additional developments, please do not hesitate to contact me. We value your partnership in creating a positive and respectful environment for all our students.

Sincerely,

[Your Name]
[Your Position/Role]
[School Name]

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还是能看出机器的语言
人们会对机器的行文习惯越来越敏感
其实反而不利于人与人之间的真诚沟通
不利于有效解决问题

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你这是比较严重的指控了，学校肯定需要时间调查

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顶私

其实我估计那娃不一定想偷回家，说不定就是搞事玩。但是不能姑息这种行为。

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我觉得是不是机器语言无所谓，能比较好的表达我的态度和意思就可以了。

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chatGPT有点啰嗦…

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但是真心有用，学校老师回信说开始调查了，会尽快告知处理情况。我想着要不要回信，还是等出结论再回信？然后我问chatgpt要不要回信？下面是它的答复：
It is courteous to acknowledge the email and express your appreciation for their response. Since the email indicates that they are actively working on resolving the incident and will update you once they have more information, you may choose to reply briefly to show your understanding and to maintain open communication. Here's a suggested reply:

Subject: Re:  Stolen Laptop Incident

Dear

Thank you for your prompt response. I completely understand and appreciate your efforts in sorting out this incident. I eagerly await your updates once you have gathered all the necessary information.

Please feel free to reach out to me if you need any further assistance or if there is anything else I can do to support the resolution process.

Thank you again for your attention to this matter.

Warm regards,

[Your Name]
[Your Contact Information]

By sending a brief reply, you show your engagement and cooperation in the resolution process while also maintaining a professional and considerate approach.

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然后，我copy paste回复了学校的邮件

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chatsgpt写的有一点点过于正式和文绉绉的。我一般都该语气。

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是的，但我觉得这个事需要严肃，刻板的形象。

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想简洁你要告诉他，你还可以叫他写封马尔克斯风格的。

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还是可以看出来的八股。像学校里的作文。

以后的来往信件是不是有越来越多的人加注（no ChatGPT please），就像很多人在自己的名字后面加注（she/her）

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要求ChatGPT2次再简单一点，得到以下的写法，我觉得更像一个真人：

I hope you're well. I wanted to inform you about a concerning incident. Last Thursday, AA left her laptop in the classroom, and it was stolen by one of her classmates, BB. Despite initially denying involvement, the laptop was later found in BB's locker. It's crucial for the school to address this promptly and ensure the safety of personal belongings within our community.

Thanks, and please keep me updated.

Best regards,

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我会更简单，大家都挺忙的，省去很多套话标点。

I would like to inform you about a concerning incident. Last Thursday, AA left her laptop in the classroom, and it was stolen by one of her classmates, BB. Despite initially denying involvement, the laptop was later found in BB's locker. It's crucial for the school to address this promptly and ensure the safety of personal belongings within our community.

Regards,

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我没想明白，为什么要no chatgpt？省事不好吗？难道要放弃洗衣机和洗碗机，自己亲自手洗才是重视家庭生活吗？

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这个太简单，不能体现我的concern

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这个水平我用足够了，这个级别还是免费的吧？

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的确。但就像要读懂新闻联播里的实际新闻一样，你要剥去很多树皮，花叶。

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这个的确是！你要的是严肃认真不怠慢

我的可能被忽略

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英語不是我母語
Chatgpt 能把文法，用字修改一下，如grammerly，已經非常好

對方是否知道我用 chatgpt ，不是我的目的


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我用chatgpt作市场分析，比Google 强太多，比市场分析公司都强，佩服

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我做生意都拿这个写，字数多的才好楼上的都不知道，你就写一句话很多人不重视。

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神奇的chatGPT, 手机版澳洲店还不能下载，我是申请一个美国的苹果ID还是把现有的ID切换国家？
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