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挑错儿Competition - Weekly 2

- 请在以下文章里挑错儿 + 并且写入正确的
- 故事里有 7 个错
- 每挑对一个 = 我给你加 1 分
- 挑错的 / 没挑出来的 / 觉得正确的也是错的 = 扣 1

能一气都对的我给你加 80分

Rolls Royce Loan

A businessmen walks into a bank in San Francesco and asks for the loan officer. He says he is going to Europe on business for two weeks and needs to borrow $7,000. The bank officer says the bank will need some kind of security for such a loan.

So the businessman hands over the keys to a Rolls Royce parked on the street infront of the bank. Everything checks out, and the bank agrees to accept the car as collateral for the loan. An employee drives the Rolls into the banks underground garage and parks it there.

Two weeks later, the businessman returns, repays the $7,000 and the interest which comes to $19.67.

The loan officer says, "We are very happy to have had your business. This transaction has worked out very nicely, but we are a little confused - while you were away, we checked you out and found that your a multimillionaire. Why would you bother to borrow $7,000?"

The businessman replied, "Where else in San Francisco can I park my car for two weeks for $20 bucks?"

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1. A businessmen -- A businessman
2. the loan officer -- a loan officer
3. San Francesco -- San Francisco
4. the keys -- the key
5. infront of -- in front of
6. banks -- bank's
7. your a multimillionaire -- you're a multimillionaire

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A businessmen (businessman) walks into a bank in San Francesco and asks for the loan officer. He says he is going to Europe on business for two weeks and needs to borrow $7,000. The bank officer says the bank will need some kind of security for such a loan.

So the businessman hands over the keys (key) to a(the) Rolls Royce parked on the street infront (in front) of the bank. Everything checks(is checked) out, and the bank agrees to accept the car as collateral for the loan. An employee drives the Rolls into the banks (bank's)underground garage and parks it there.

Two weeks later, the businessman returns, repays the $7,000 and the interest which comes to $19.67.

The loan officer says, "We are very happy to have had your business. This transaction has worked out very nicely, but we are a little confused - while you were away, we checked you out and found that your (you are) a multimillionaire. Why would you bother to borrow $7,000?"

The businessman replied, "Where else in San Francisco can I park my car for two weeks for $20 bucks?"

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哈, AS你迟了. 难得难得啊

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诶,我怎么没看见San Franciso拼错了呢?

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我的2. the loan officer -- a loan officer指的是下面这句话里的:

A businessmen walks into a bank in San Francesco and asks for the loan officer.

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我觉得你很有希望得80分,不过rita就是没有加80分的权限,哈哈哈

晚安

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这算威胁吗?

晚安.

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你们两个就不能留点给别的同学?

:)

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俺想说,把所有的时态都改成过去式比较好。
对不起,懒得打出来。

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Joke里只要时态一致就可以了.

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个人意见。
俺看着整篇的现在时非常不爽。

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借问下,最后一段中,用了过去式, 要不要改回现在时?

The businessman replied, "Where else in San Francisco can I park my car for two weeks for $20 bucks?"

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昨天夜里让那两位版主比高低半天之后,还没看出来这个。 哈哈哈哈

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mark下晚上回家做

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A businessmen (businessman) walks into a bank in San Francesco (San Francisco) and asks for the loan officer. He says he is going to Europe on business for two weeks and needs to borrow $7,000. The bank officer says the bank will need some kind of security for such a loan.

So the businessman hands over the keys to a (the) Rolls Royce parked on the street infront (in front) of the bank. Everything checks (is checked) out, and the bank agrees to accept the car as collateral for the loan. An employee drives the Rolls into the banks (bank’s) underground garage and parks it there.

Two weeks later, the businessman returns, repays the $7,000 and the interest which comes to $19.67.

The loan officer says, "We are very happy to have had your business. This transaction has worked out very nicely, but we are a little confused - while you were away, we checked you out and found that your (you are) a multimillionaire. Why would you bother to borrow $7,000?"

The businessman replied, "Where else in San Francisco can I park my car for two weeks for $20 bucks?"

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那不行
我发现,大多数人对于 present tense 最变牛。 Past tense 还好

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what is 最变牛?

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估计是便扭!!!

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我觉得讲故事的话,就像人家写小说,回忆录,好像都是过去时态

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Rolls Royce Loan

A businessmen walks into a bank in San Francesco and asks for the loan officer. He says he is going to Europe on business for two weeks and needs to borrow $7,000. The bank officer says the bank will need some kind of security for such a loan.

So the businessman hands over the keys to a Rolls Royce parked on the street infront of the bank. Everything checks out, and the bank agrees to accept the car as collateral for the loan. An employee drives the Rolls into the banks underground garage and parks it there.

Two weeks later, the businessman returns, repays the $7,000 and the interest which comes to $19.67.

The loan officer says, "We are very happy to have had your business. This transaction has worked out very nicely, but we are a little confused - while you were away, we checked you out and found that your a multimillionaire. Why would you bother to borrow $7,000?"

The businessman replied, "Where else in San Francisco can I park my car for two weeks for $20 bucks?"

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我找出来8个,怎么办?

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我得看看对不对啊,开会呢,一会儿再看
文章是那样的。。。

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A businessmen (businessman) walks into a bank in San Francesco and asks for the loan officer. He says he is going to Europe on business for two weeks and needs to borrow $7,000. The bank officer says the bank will need some kind of security for such a loan.

So the businessman hands over the keys to a Rolls Royce parked (parking) on the street infront(in front) of the bank. Everything checks out, and the bank agrees to accept the car as collateral for the loan. An employee drives the Rolls into the banks (bank's) underground garage and parks it there.

Two weeks later, the businessman returns, repays the $7,000 and the interest which(delete which) comes to $19.67.

The loan officer says, "We are very happy to have had your business. This transaction has worked out very nicely, but we are a little confused - while you were away, we checked you out and found that your ( you are) a multimillionaire. Why would you bother to borrow $7,000?"

The businessman replied(replies), "Where else in San Francisco can I park my car for two weeks for $20 bucks?"

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Rolls Royce Loan

A businessmen(businessman) walks into a bank in San Francesco(San Francisco)and asks for the(a) loan officer. He says he is going to Europe on business for two weeks and needs to borrow $7,000. The bank officer says the bank will need some kind of security for such a loan.

So the businessman hands over the keys(key) to a Rolls Royce parked on the street infront(in front) of the bank. Everything checks out(is checked out), and the bank agrees to accept the car as collateral for the loan. An employee drives the Rolls into the banks(bank's) underground garage and parks it there.

Two weeks later, the businessman returns, repays the $7,000 and the interest which comes to $19.67.

The loan officer says, "We are very happy to have had(having) your business. This transaction has worked out very nicely, but we are a little confused - while you were away, we checked you out and found that your a multimillionaire. Why would you bother to borrow $7,000?"

The businessman replied, "Where else in San Francisco can I park my car for two weeks for $20 bucks?"

我挑出了8个,哈哈~~不晓得那个to have had是不是对,读着有点别扭,虽然看语法好像没问题~ infront不知道是打错了还是真有问题,也改了

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1. A businessmen -- businessman

walks into a bank in

2. San Francesco -- San Francisco

and asks for

3. the loan officer --- a loan officer.

He says he is going to Europe on business for two weeks and needs to borrow $7,000.

The bank officer says the bank will need some kind of security for such a loan.

So the businessman hands over the keys to a Rolls Royce -- the Rolls Royce

parked on the street

4. infront -- in front

of the bank. Everything checks out, and the bank agrees to accept the car as collateral for the loan.

An employee drives the Rolls into the

5. banks  -- bank 's

underground garage and parks it there.

Two weeks later, the businessman returns, repays the $7,000 and the interest which comes to $19.67.

The loan officer says, "We are very happy to have had your business. This transaction has worked out very nicely,

but we are a little confused - while you were away, we checked you out and found that

6. your --> you are

a multimillionaire.

Why would you bother to borrow $7,000?"

The businessman

7. replied, --> replies

"Where else in San Francisco can I park my car for two weeks for $20 bucks?"

[ 本帖最后由 bffbffbff 于 2009-4-30 21:42 编辑 ]

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Wooooo

还没有满分的呢 :)

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A businessmen (businessman) walks into a bank in San Francesco (Francisco) and asks for the loan officer. He says he is going to Europe on business for two weeks and needs to borrow $7,000. The bank officer says the bank will need some kind of security for such a loan.

So the businessman hands over the keys to a Rolls Royce parked on the street infront (in front) of the bank. Everything checks out, and the bank agrees to accept the car as collateral for the loan. An employee drives the Rolls into the banks (bank's) underground garage and parks it there.

Two weeks later, the businessman returns, repays the $7,000 and (with) the interest(,) which comes to $19.67.

The loan officer says, "We are very happy to have had your business. This transaction has worked out very nicely, but we are a little confused - while you were away, we checked you out and found that your (you're) a multimillionaire. Why would you bother to borrow $7,000?"

The businessman replied (replies), "Where else in San Francisco can I park my car for two weeks for $ () 20 bucks?"

[ 本帖最后由 wuyu 于 2009-5-3 19:35 编辑 ]

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