Dan is going to camp and he packs his bag.
这句话哪里错了？
是不是应该改成and he is packing his bag?
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刚刚又想了一下，he packs his bag, present tense 说明是常态，he does that regularly. 所以错了。
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Dan is going camping and he is packing his bag?
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好像应该是这样了，或者he has packed his bag?
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我觉得这个也可以。
我念书的时候曾经问过外教一个句子里有多种时态语法是否正确。他说这个主要看句子的时间点。要是是一系列动作在不同时间完成，那么就可以在同一个句子里使用多种时态。比如说： My daughter reached for the third ice cream after she had already finished two.
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是的，今天孩子突然问我这句话为什么错，一时之间没有解释出来 ：P
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我认为问题在于“and”一词, 因为他是去露营之前先收拾行囊。如果将句子更改为“Dan is going to camp so he packs his bag.” 或 “Dan packs his bag before going to camp.”, 应该会更好。
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同意LZ，be going to 表示将要做的， Dan is going to camping and he is packing his bag 是说Dan 将要去camping, 正在装包
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Dan is going camping and he packed his bag
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